IELTS Simulation Writing Test 9 – Bài Mẫu Tham Khảo Chi Tiết Task 1 Task 2

Mở Bài

There is an increasing concern amongst some people that while being beneficial to teleworkers, teleworking brings a disadvantage to their employers. In my viewpoint, this opinion is not completely convinced.  

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, it is undeniable that working from home is advantageous to employees. First, not only does this working style help them save many expenses in terms of commute, but it also makes sense when they might avoid unforeseeable dangers on the route between their workplace and accommodation. Traffic congestion, air and noise pollution, traffic accidents, and the high incidence of street crimes like robbery or burglary are good examples of the risks arising when they leave their home. Also, in the worst-case scenarios like the outbreak of an epidemic or even pandemic as Coronavirus in recent days has forced most em  

Thân Bài 2

On the other hand, teleworking also benefits employers on a financial basis as well as about their staff’s productivity. Initially, managers might get rid of some types of overheads once applying this working method. The financial burden of expenses concerning space, office, and utility fees like electricity, the Internet connection is always brought to a fore in business. Besides, when working from home, employees might choose places at which they have a sense of comfort for working such as coffee shops, libraries, or silent zones in certain buildings, which works wonders for the company’s work performance as a whole.  

Kết Bài

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the merits teleworking brings to both employers and employees are tangible. (273 words)             

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