Cambridge 11 Test 4 (IELTS Writing) – Bài Viết Tham Khảo Từ Anh Ngữ Thiên Ân

Câu hỏi : The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveyed asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Câu hỏi : Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people; however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Mở Bài

Concerning the progress of the development of countries, many governments focus on economic progress as their most important goal; however, some people opine that governments also need pay attention to other types of progress because of the equal importance. While admitting the undeniable role of economic development, I also subscribe to the latter view.

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, it is not hard to explain the reasons why many countries tend towards the growth of the economy. In essence, the health of the economy has profound effects on national matters like employment, living standard, social security. A burgeoning economy might act as a scheme to promote the development of these. In contrast, if the economic progress is overlooked, this can be productive of damages out of governments’ control. Take social evils in impoverished nations as an example, a poor economy might not ensure jobs and food for its citizens, so the high incidence of crimes for material benefits like theft, burglary, or even smuggling is inevitable. 

Thân Bài 2

On the other hand; however, other kinds of progress have an intimate connection with the course of the economy. The breakthrough in technology and science helps pave the way for the advance of economic fields. For example, investing for cutting-edge labor-saving machines seems to be a cost-effective and productive policy for production progress. Besides, a clever policy of diplomacy together with stability in terms of politics and religion plays a prominent part in the peace and prosperity of a country. In this way, a government may avoid conflicts, discrimination, or even wars and helps their people take a sanguine view of the country’s stability. 

Kết Bài

For the aforementioned reasons, it seems to me that not only should governments put the emphasis on economic progress, but they also focus on others by virtue of their consequence. (321 words)   

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