Cambridge 10 Test 3 (IELTS Writing) – Bài Viết Tham Khảo Từ Anh Ngữ Thiên Ân

Câu hỏi : The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It can be seen from the first chart that 29,665 graduate students entered higher education, this option held the highest position in the top four. The figure for part-time work was lower significantly with 17,735 students while only 3,500 students choose voluntary work, which was an eighth compared to the number for further study. Especially, the section of unemployment had 16,235 students in 2008.

Meanwhile, there was a negligible difference in the number of postgraduate students who went on to higher education and got part-time work, with 2,725 and 2,535 students, respectively. The number for students being charge of voluntary work was extremely low, only 345 people. Eventually, 1,625 postgraduate students could not land any jobs after leaving their colleges. (174 words)    

Câu hỏi : Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Mở Bài

It is no doubt true that countries are getting more and more similar in consequence of the fact that people can purchase the same goods omnipresent across the world. This essay will demonstrate that this development brings about positive effects on the economy and society.  

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, should there be no limits to shopping among countries, there are several benefits regarding the economy. Initially, this is susceptible to help bring considerable profits to countries by means of tourism. Nowadays, people can go travelling to virtually everywhere and during trips, tourists often take a vivid interest in buying products ranging from necessities for their journeys to delicacies for their family and friends. Besides, the idea here is that the burgeoning demand in cross-country shopping also brings cost-effectiveness to themselves consumers. Indeed, they do not spend much money and time on travelling to have access to the same products they need throughout the world. The advent of the Internet has paved the way for electronic commerce in most countries and regions, which steps in to save a large amount of money and time for customers. 

Thân Bài 2

On the other hand, once people do not have difficulties making a purchase of similar products across the world, this exerts advantageous effects on society. This helps stimulate awareness raise amongst consumers about purchases despite their noticeable similarity compared to domestic goods. Justifiably, most manufacturers put the emphasis on highlighting unique elements of their own products, especially locally produced products. In this way, producers contribute to introduce cultural, landscape, natural characteristics in their country to foreigners. Also, the profound effect on employment is undeniable. Sellers or even manufacturers need to recruits more laborers to undertake and accelerate producing progress. The governments in countries might take a sanguine view of the growth of the labor market. 

Kết Bài

For the aforementioned reasons, I opine that this reality tends towards a positive development, especially with respect to economic and social impacts. (322 words)

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