Barron’s IELTS Writing Test 4 – Bài Mẫu Tham Khảo Chi Tiết Task 1 Task 2

Câu hỏi : The proliferation of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public transportation systems in order to help alleviate this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution.
Do you think it is better for governments to spend money developing public transportation or developing new kinds of cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Mở Bài

There is a profound concern among people about problems of pollution and global warming which are productive of using private automobiles in many parts across the world. While some people opine that the development of public transportation systems should be focused to mitigate this problem, others believe that it is worthwhile to invest in the advance of cars operational by electricity or other forms to cause less contamination. In my opinion, the latter view is completely convinced compared to the first one.  

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, humans these days could make use of the great breakthroughs in technology to manufacture environmentally-friendly cars at an affordable price. This idea is in our capacity and conditions through modern science and technology. For example, Japan is known as one of the countries succeeding in creating such less detrimental cars to the environment with the engines running by electricity or even water. Also, virtually everyone is increasingly concerned about whether they could afford to own a car with green energy. In the not-too-distance future, with sources of energy renewable and sustainable like electricity, water, or solar, these kinds of cars would be affordable.  

Thân Bài 2

On the other hand, making this policy become a reality helps guarantee people’s rights in terms of commuting by private vehicles. We might not overlook benefits public transits bring to the environment; however, the convenience of traveling bears testimony to owning a private automobile. Commuters could arrive at their destinations directly without sparing much time to wait to catch a bus that could hardly reach sites out of its routes. Besides, in place of forcing people to use public transportations, moderate control and a policy facilitating the development of manufacturing cars with alternative sources of energy play an important role to curb impacts of global warming caused by exhaust fume from existing cars.    

Kết Bài

For the aforementioned reason, I suppose devoting financial resources to developing environmentally-friendly cars is more essential than spending money on public transportation systems for mitigating problems of pollution and global warming. (333 words)          

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