Cambridge 15 Test 4 (IELTS Writing) – Bài Viết Tham Khảo Từ Anh Ngữ Thiên Ân

Câu hỏi : The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Câu hỏi : In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

Mở Bài

 There is a common trend among some cultures that offspring are usually educated that if they apply themselves, they can have anything they want. In my opinion, this tendency brings about the pros and cons. 

Thân Bài 1

On the one hand, this message is a good therapy to educate children about the importance of tenacity and optimism. In effect, when kids are encouraged to make every effort for their achievements, they would become tenacious people. In the long run, this helps shape children’s positive characters in their work and life. Rather than easily giving up tasks or doing them in a representative way, they always dedicate themselves to working and devote their resources to finishing any missions once assuming. Besides, despite the fact that they could encounter unforeseeable difficulties, because of this message, they may take a sanguine view of everything to continue doing until reaching their accomplishments.

Thân Bài 2

By way of contrast, putting the perception that children can have anything they need if they strive to work or study is likely to spoil them in some ways. First, they might do everything, even harmful, to reach their goals at all costs. Take video game addicts as an example, to give an impression on their friends or to get a win in video games, some children might spend much of their time playing video games. This way does harm to their health and exacerbates their sedentary lifestyle. In the worst scenario, children educated about this message might have illegal actions and then, commit crimes. For example, when they age and want to have an affluent life without working hard, they take part in robberies, thefts, or even kidnapping for ransom because they hold the belief that should they make attempt, they can someday succeed in these.

Kết Bài

For the reasons mentioned above, it is my firm conviction that there will be both the benefits and drawbacks if we told children that they can accomplish anything they want through their non-stop efforts. (327 words) 

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